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--- a/blog/2019-02-23-resurracting-an-hp-7440a-plotter.markdown
+++ b/blog/2019-02-23-resurracting-an-hp-7440a-plotter.markdown
@@ -8,19 +8,19 @@ tags: plotter, art, python, hardware, recurse
 
 I finally decided to give in to FOMO on
 [#plottertwitter](https://twitter.com/hashtag/plottertwitter?lang=en) and bought
-an old plotter off ebay. Me being in batch at [Recurse
-Center](https://recurse.com) helped a lot, from the decision to get one to
-[nerdsnipe](https://xkcd.com/356/) [Alex](https://github.com/wildconceits) into
-collaborating with me. All of the work below is done with him.
+an old plotter off *ebay*. Being in batch at the [Recurse
+Center](https://recurse.com) helped a lot: the old hardware laying around inspired the purchase, and a successful
+[nerdsnipe](https://xkcd.com/356/) of [Alex](https://github.com/wildconceits) gave me a willing
+collaborator. All of the work below was done with him.
 
 ## What is a plotter anyway?
 Plotters are graphics devices that can transfer vector images onto a physical
 medium. The core mechanism of a plotter is an arm that can move a pen in 2
-axes (w.r.t the medium) and ability to pick up or place down the pen to draw.
+axes (w.r.t the medium) and the ability to pick up or place down the pen to draw.
 Versions of plotters exist where paper is replaced with other flat materials
 like vinyl or pen with a knife to make it a cutting plotter.
 
-I like to think plotters as the naive solution to the problem that computers
+I like to think of plotters as the naive solution to the problem that computers
 should be able to draw. Smaller, expensive memory chips (or [magnetic
 cores](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magnetic-core_memory)) in earlier computers
 made working with raster images hard, and plotters didn't need much operating
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ memory.
 ## HP7440A
 
 HP7440A _"ColorPro"_ was an affordable plotter manufactured by HP, it can hold
-and switch between 8 pens simultaneously and draw on surfaces as large as A4.
+and switch between 8 pens simultaneously, and draw on surfaces as large as A4.
 [HP Museum has a longer post about this
 plotter](http://hpmuseum.net/display_item.php?hw=80)
 
@@ -40,33 +40,32 @@ easy it is to open, take that 2018 tech!
 
 ![7440A Top cover open](/images/7440a_open.jpg){ width=600px }
 
-The internal mechanism is pretty simple, There are two servos. One for moving
+The internal mechanism is pretty simple. There are two servos. One for moving
 the paper back and forward, and the other for moving the pen left and right.
-There is also a solenoid based lever to switch pen down and up.
+There is also a solenoid-based lever to move pens to and from the paper.
 
 ## Talk To Me
 
 ![7440A Interfaces](/images/7440a_interface.jpg){ width=600px }
 
-However, our plotter didn't come with any cables to either power it or to send
+Our plotter didn't come with any cables to either power it or to send it
 commands.
 
-Power supply was the biggest mystery. After digging through the manuals, and the
-[hand drawn schematics from HP
-Museum](http://hpmuseum.net/exhibit.php?hwdoc=80), we managed to identify it to
-be a `10-0-10` AC to AC. Luckily someone was selling one in ebay, but we could've
-built one ourselves if not.
+Puzzling out the power supply was the biggest mystery. After digging through the manuals and
+[hand drawn schematics from the HP
+Museum](http://hpmuseum.net/exhibit.php?hwdoc=80), we managed to identify it as
+a `10-0-10` AC to AC. Luckily someone was selling one on *ebay*.
 
-Communication turned out be just standard serial, however our plotter has a
-`DB-22` adaptor, so we had to use a `DB-22` to `DB-9` adpator and then `DB-9` to
-`usb` adaptor.
+Communication turned out to be done using standard serial over a
+`DB-22` adapter. We solved this by chaining a `DB-22` to `DB-9` adapter to a `DB-9` to
+`usb` adapter.
 
 The final step was writing in the only language the plotter can understand,
-[`HP-GL`](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HP-GL) or `HP Graphics Langauge`. Lucky
+[`HP-GL`](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HP-GL) or `HP Graphics Language`. Lucky
 for us, HP was on top of the plotter game when plotters were popular, so `HP-GL`
 has become a de facto standard for talking to plotters.
 
-.. and finally our plotter moves!
+...and finally our plotter moves!
 
 <video width="600" height="450" controls>
   <source src="/images/7440a_printing.mp4" type="video/mp4">
@@ -75,24 +74,24 @@ has become a de facto standard for talking to plotters.
 ## Goooooooo faster.
 
 HP7440A has a limited amount of buffer space (about `60 bytes`), so if we send a
-longer command list to the interface, it will just drop bits after 60 and crash.
+longer command list to the interface, it will drop all bits after 60 and crash.
 
-Our first naive solution was to add `1s` sleep between sending subsequent
-commands, however this made drawings really slow and added artifacts from
+Our first solution was to add `1s` sleep between sending subsequent
+commands, however this made drawings really slow, and led to artifacts from
 ink bleeding while the plotter is waiting for the next command.
 
-Another recurser Francis pointed us to a clever hack in the [wait function]
-in [hpgl.js]. This function uses the HPGL command `OA;` to block execution
+Another Recurser, Francis, pointed us to a clever hack in the [wait function]
+from [hpgl.js]. This function uses the HPGL command `OA;` to block execution
 until the plotter is finished with the current instruction. When the plotter
 executes `OA;` it sends the current pen position, but it first needs to
 wait until the pen has stopped moving. Thus we can batch a bunch of commands
-and append it with `OA;`. As soon as we see the position over the serial,
-we know that the previous batch is consumed and we can send the next batch of commands.
+and append `OA;`; once we read the position from the serial,
+we know that the previous batch is consumed and we can send the next batch.
 
 [wait function]: https://djipco.github.io/hpgl/hpgl.js.html#line1535
 [hpgl.js]: https://github.com/djipco/hpgl
 
-The code for it looks like this:
+The code for this trick looks like:
 
 ```python
 import serial
@@ -149,11 +148,11 @@ After initial success we quickly realized our plotter does not respond to any
 commands that involved HP-GL instructions to draw basic geometry, like `CI` for
 circle.
 
-A re-reading of the manual made us realize HP sold these functionality as an
-[hardware adaptor board that plugs in the
-bottom](https://support.hp.com/us-en/document/bpp01354), which we don't have.
+A re-reading of the manual made us realize that HP sold this functionality as a
+[hardware adapter board that plugs into the
+bottom](https://support.hp.com/us-en/document/bpp01354). Our plotter did not arrive with this board.
 
-But everything in computer graphics is a line anyway, right? With some [root of
+But everything in computer graphics is a line anyway, right? Using some [root of
 unity](http://mathworld.wolfram.com/RootofUnity.html) math, we came up with a circle
 drawing routine.
 
@@ -163,16 +162,16 @@ drawing routine.
 
 ## This is only the beginning
 
-Hardware wise, only thing remaining to fix is our pens, which expired in
+Hardware wise, the only thing left to fix is our pens, which expired in
 1996! We are yet to come up with a strategy to refill/replace them.
 
 ![Plotter Pen](/images/7440a_pens.jpg){ width=600px }
 
-I am also going to leave this plotter at RC, so that other recursers can
-continue hacking on it, and get another one for me and actually do some
+I am also going to leave this plotter at RC (so that other Recursers can
+continue hacking on it), and buy another one for me to actually do some
 generative art. :-)
 
 ## Notes
 1. Big thanks to Amy and Francis and Alex S for their help at various points.
 2. All of our python code is here: [https://github.com/dbalan/plotter-scripts](https://github.com/dbalan/plotter-scripts)
-3. Thanks Tom for proof reading this post!
+3. Thanks to all who proof read this post.